Friday, 24 October 2008

Characters, Locations, Props...

Here are the pictures of our actors who will be the actors in all three adverts (which will create the link) I still have more pictures of other candidates who we decided against using in our ad. Also, I have put up pictures of possible locations of the advert and will be mentioning the props which will be used!




Male character (boyfriend) in all three adverts, Ben is a drama student therefore will be more helpful to use.









Female character (girlfriend) in all three adverts, Lucy has experience in drama at GCSE. Therefore she will be helpful to use!





Set Locations...



The Drama Studio comes in really handy when creating our adverts as it is all black. This means that we can use props/mise en scene in an effective way with nothing around us to steal the focus. In addition to this, myself and Cilia are drama students and use this area on a regular basis. We will be able to use our free's and shooting schedule effectively in order to film as much as possible!




Door to Drama studio...












Possible living area (has the appropriate mis en secene to do so)












Props used in series of three adverts:
-Mint Packet
-Cat (could be listed as character!)
-Clothing

Developed storyboard for 'Ad Three'

Below are the developed storyboards for advert three, we decided to changed our original idea for this ad completely as it was un effective and seemed boring. Instead, we are showing continuity throughout the series of three adverts, by having the final ad showing the couple meeting the girls mother. We thought as nearly everybody experiences this situation at some point in their life, it would be easy to relate to and be realistic. It will be appropriate for our target audience and also add humour which we intended to do throughout each of the adverts. I also feel that this is an effective idea to use for the final advert!















Original Idea- which has been rejected!















Page 2 of original idea- which has been rejected!










Final storyboard for advert 3



















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Senario: Girl thinks that boy is talking about her when he smells something 'gorgeous' but she is mistaken because he ends up picking up the cat! = Aspect of humour
We decided to have the girl with bad breath for this advert because our mint is for all sexes, therefore it is important that both the boy and girl makes use of the mint in at least one of the three adverts. We may need to tweak the dialogue in this advert because we cannot have a silent moment in the advert therefore either we add more dialogue to fill up the gaps, or we find music which will replace the dialogue when nothing is being said. This disadvantage that we could encounter when filming this, is that the cat may not do the things that we want it to do!! We could also possibly include more shots into this storyboard if we find that it is not long enough. The advantage that we have is that we can film at my house, and because I live near the school then thats a bonus

Tuesday, 21 October 2008

Developed storyboard for 'Ad One'

Below is the storyboard for Advert one, we have only made minor changes to this advert and there is more sense of humour being created through the characters which we wanted to focus on throughout the series of three adverts.





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First draft of storyboards for 'Ad Two'

Here is the first drafts of mine and cilia's storyboard for 'advert two', we decided to change alot of details within this first storyboard so I have decided to post it on here to show the progress in which we have made from the first to final drafts! There are 3 developed 'advert one' storyboards on this blog as we found ways to improve from the original idea :)
















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Below is the final draft!

















Wednesday, 15 October 2008

Evidence of Mint Brainstorms/Idea's

Below are the developed idea's of mine and Cilia's 'Mint Ad', we accepted and rejected a number of these idea's and later on i will be posting the first storyboard, the improved, and the the final storyboard which we are working from up to date!























Here are the possible jingles for the add which are brainstormed...













And here are the possible storylines to our advert which some
have been used and some havent!
















Original Treatment

Here is a copy of the first Treatment me and Cilia wrote. However, since then we have a changed a number of factors within two of our storyboards so we have created an updated version. Below is the original Treatment, not the final!


Treatment 1
Exploring our coursework


The idea cilia and I have created is an advertisement for mints, aimed at our chosen target audience of people aged between 15 to 25. We have targeted this audience by having themes that they can relate to. We knew beforehand that mints were always being advertised on TV, yet none of them focused on the time in which it took a mint to work. Therefore we created our own unique selling point, which was that our product works the fastest when you need it most.

Our first advert will include only one character, so that the focus isn’t taken from the product itself. The setting of the first advert will take place in a bathroom, which is where everyone starts there day, therefore we made the link between starting your day, and starting our advert sequence in this place. The first storyboard includes a female character waking up to a radio, which will start with the sound of a voice- over saying ‘Do you have bad breath?’ the girl nods to herself in the mirror while looking miserably. She scans over previous products in her bathroom which haven’t worked then picks up the ‘miracle mint’, the mood changes immediately with the catchphrase ‘Shake, Click, Fresh, Ahh’, being narrated over the shots of her movements shaking the packet, clicking the lid open, tasting the freshness, and then being satisfied with the end result of the product. All of the shots will be either mid- close shots, to extreme- close ups, which will create the effect of a real advert. The advert will finish with a shot of a fogged up bathroom mirror where the words ‘miracle mint’ appear to have been written. This idea is simple and straight- forward to film, yet we included a variety of shots that will make up for the simplicity. The narrative throughout this advert will not be used in all of them; however, we will make the link between all three adverts by using the catchphrase ‘Shake, Click, Fresh, Ahh’, with the shots to match.

The second advert is aimed at the younger boundary of our target audience; it revolves around a young couple in which there is an awkward moment between the pair when the girl rejects his kiss, once she smells his bad breath. We are going to use a variety of shots to introduce the characters and make the audience feel involved in the action so that they feel the mint will affect their lives too. We have chosen to include more close- ups when presenting the mint so that the audience are focused on the product. There are some aspects of humour throughout the advert, which will enable the audience to remember it more alongside the ‘jingle’ which is present throughout all three adverts, which is ‘Shake, Click, Fresh, Ahh.’ For this advert we were considering having a background song to keep it simple and light- hearted. The song we were thinking of using is ‘Scouting for Girls- Heartbeat’ which will form a parallel sound with the action in the advert.

The third advert revolves around a group of friends and is simpler than the previous two adverts. This is because the advert focus’ on the jingle ‘Shake Click, Fresh, Ahh’. We will be using several characters to represent the mint as being an ‘all- rounder’ and we will do this by using mainly close up and extreme close- ups of different people consuming the mint. This advert will be quite repetitive which will make it more memorable, as well as having a slight beat to it.

We want these adverts to be simple and humorous for an audience to watch so that it is easy to intake the information and they are left with a memorable advert which has persuaded them to buy the product.

Article on creating a successful advert

A successful television commercials must begin with an attention getting opening. One of the greatest challenges of effective TV advertising in today's environment is the lack of attention TV ads get from consumers. first, many TV watchers get up and leave the room when commercials come on. Second, with technology like Tivo, consumers can easily skip over commercials to get to recorded programming. Then, even while people are in the room, a small percentage actually focus on a commercial to receive the message.

If people do watch and pay attention, what will make television messages impacting? An attention getting opening is what draws people into the commercial. Without something instantly impacting, the audience will be gone.

Television commercials must maximize their strengths. The opportunity to not only use visual stimulation, but to tell a story, present a product demonstration, do comparisons and combine these with sound and dialog are unique to TV. The creative opportunities are virtually limitless with the multi-sensory appeals.

TV commercials must be specific and clear with their messages. People should not only laugh or cry, but they should also be able to identify the brand and see a message that makes sense and is impacting. It must communicate the benefits of a product that match the needs of the targeted audience.

Ultimately, with the high relative cost of television advertising, planning and delivery must be excellent to give it competitive efficiency with other media.

Advertising Glossary

appeal to emotion- an advertising technique when advertisers appeal to those emotional needs experienced by all humans

association- an advertising technique whereby products are associated with the people, values, and lifestyles depicted in the ads

audience- recipient of the intended communication

brand extension- extending the brand name to other products

brand equity- money earned by brand name

camera angle- the angle, high, straight, or low that a shot is taken

camera shot- the distance between the camera and the subject

camera movement- the movement of the camera position from left to right, forward or backward, up or down, stationary left or right, and zoom in or out.

caption- a phrase, sentence, or short paragraph describing the contents of an illustration such as photos or charts. Photo captions are usually placed directly above, below, or to the side of the pictures they describe.

claim- the verbal or print part of an ad that makes some claim of superiority for the product

codes and conventions- the familiar and predictable forms and techniques used by the media to communicate certain ideas or to convey a desired impression. Technical codes include camera angles, sound, and lighting. Symbolic codes include the language, dress, and actions of characters.

constructed- built, formed, or devised by fitting parts or elements together systematically

copy- text including advertiser's name, sales message, trademark or slogan


deconstruct- to take apart, analyze, or break down a media text into its component parts in order to understand how and why it was created

demographics- common characteristics used for population segmentation including age, gender, post code, and income

fad- a custom, style, etc., that many people are interested in for a short time; passing craze

fear tactic- an advertising technique whereby products are sold based on our fears

genre- kind or type

gender identity- the sex group (masculine or feminine) to which an individual biologically belongs

gender role- the set of behaviors that society considers appropriate for each sex

gender stereotype- an oversimplified or distorted generalization about the characteristics of men and women

headline- the short lines of emphasised text that introduce detail information in the body test that follows

ideology- the doctrines, opinions, or way of thinking of an individual, class, etc.; specifically, the body of ideas on which a particular political, economic, or social system is based; a set of beliefs about the world

jingle- verse or song that repeats sounds or has a catchy rhythm

jolt- a new jolt occurs each time a camera shot changes

line extension- new products in the same product category using the same brand name

media text- any form of reproduced communication, from a book, film, or CD, to an ad, a toy, or a T-shirt

mass media- the methods of communication used to reach large numbers of people at the same time - TV, newspapers, radio, magazines, films, books, the internet

marketing- the process of promoting and selling a product or service based on decisions about what the product image should be and who is most likely to buy it

parity product- products in which all or most of the brands available are identical

PSA- public service announcements

psychographics- an analysis of people's attitudes, beliefs, desires, and needs.

popular culture- mainstream culture - the arts, artifacts, entertainments, fads, beliefs and values shared by large segments of the society

positioning- based upon what the product does and who it is for

Public Service Announcement- PSAs are part of the licensing agreement of every commercial televsion and radio station and produce no advertising revenue. PSAs sell ideas, such as donating to charity.

representation- the way groups are presented in the media and popular culture, often through stereotypical images that affect our views of gender, race, class, age, and ability

slogan- short, memorable advertising phrase. When a product or company uses a slogan consistently, the slogan can become an important element of identification in the public's perception of the product.

sex role- a person's sex role is defined partly by genetic makeup but mainly by the society and culture in which the individual lives

signature- contact information

stereotypes- an unvarying form or pattern; specifically, a fixed or conventional notion or conception, as of a person, group, idea, etc., held by a number of people, and allowing for no individuality, critical judgment, etc.; over-simplified images or representations of people or groups of people based on race, gender, occupation, or age, which can be used to justify our popular attitudes and beliefs

storyboard- a series of sketches of the frames of an event, with the corresponding audio information, and shot list.

subheads- mini-headlines that appear lower in the print ad making the copy easier to readm making the ad more appealing, and helping direct the reader's attention

tag line- a phrase that follows the brand name and it is often at the end of a commercial or the bottom of an ad.

target audience- specific groups of people that media producers or advertisers want to reach

text- anything that is read. listened to, or viewed

trend- to have a general tendency: said of events, conditions, opinions,etc.

values- the social principles, goals or standards held or accepted by an individual, class, society, etc.

visual- photo or graphic

Initial Ideas

Below are the initial idea's that me and Cilia had come up with in the first stages of production, next to these ideas are some of the 'USP's' which would be included:

-Mint's
USP: Takes away the causes of bad breath, its refreshing and it is the fastest working mint yet.
-Scented/ Pocket Tissues
USP: Variety of scents, Soft, Anti- Bacterial.
-Deodrant
USP: Suitable for everyone, no 'white marks' and an 'exotic' smell.
-Nail Varnish
USP: Long lasting, variety of colours, affordable, chip resistant.
-Mobile Phone
USP: Large pixel camera, internet connectivity, small, variety of colours and textures
-Bath/Shower Product
USP: Nice fragrance, free sponge, leaves skin feeling silky smooth, suitable for all skin types
-Healthy Eating
USP: Easy way to get your 'five a day'.
-Laptop
USP: Small screen, large memory, you are able to customize it to your own interests.
-Make-Up Remover
USP: Takes off even waterproof makeup, kiwi extract and in the form of a wipe.
-Perfume
USP: Romantic theme for 'him and her' in a portable packaging style

After we had discussed and brainstorm these idea's, we decided to narrow further to the idea of: Mints and Pocket Size Tissues

Mints Influences: Tic Tac, Mentos

-People in restaurant eating foods like garlic etc, mint cures the smell
-People with bad breath, try everyting, but only mint gives the best and freshest effect
-Mint being shared around a group of friends.
-Mint not being shared 'too good to be shared'
-Confidence booster, one someone has the mind they are confident
-Couple, woman cant get away from boyfriend after he's had mint
-Hard day at work, mint makes them feel refreshed
- Misunderstanding of guy smelling cat, when girl thinks he is complimenting her.

Pocket Tissues Influences: Kleenex, Olbus tissues

-Girl with cold, shoves normal tissues losely in her bag, they blow away, someone hands her pocket tissues.
-Someone upset, uses the pocket tissues given by friend
-Child sneezing, parent hands over pocket tissues

After looking at each of these idea's, we have come to the conclusion of advertising 'Mints'. We feel there are more possibilities and we can explore several idea's with this product. We feel it is the strongest and most positive idea we had. From here, I will be analysing a selection of adverts which have a similar style to what we want to create ourselves.

Tuesday, 14 October 2008

First stage of coursework

Before Cilia and I started our series of three Adverts, we firstly had to create an advertisement for 'Heinz Baked Beanz'. I thought that i'd put this up just as a base to our coursework and to show where we have come from. Below are a selection of initial ideas and the final piece!

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